lunes, 27 de mayo de 2013

Being a 19-year-old-woman in Chile


Since memorable times, the inclusion of women in society has been hard. But today we can see a changes....in Chile, it is possible to observe a number of disadvantages and advantages of the female role in society .   

Some advantages of being a 19 year old woman is the energy  and vitality  to do things and the ability to decide because in Chile when you have 18 years ..you are an adult .Women are responsible, careful, dedicated to our work. When you go to parties ( especially to clubs)  you never pay for something  .Usually  when you are a woman and you have a dates  .. you don't need to pay .. because a gentleman pays for you .(if he doesn't y.. let it go).  Another advantage is we can  get a license to cry  wherever  we want!!  Sometimes it is  easier to  get what we want because we have the  capacity to manipulate the male sex. Another advantage is  we are multi-functional, we can study, work, be a mom.Generally, all society feels a respect for women,but  the best thing about being a woman is the capacity  to be a mother .. that is the biggest gift.

About Disadvantages in Chile unfortunately, at work we are overshadowed by males .. because they (men)receive a higher salary for the same job .. another disadvantage in Chile, is the value of health plans, when you are a woman it much more expensive!!! other disadvantage is that usually the parents are very protective with women.. (In my case my parents are very overprotective).Another disadvantage .. when you are woman, you can experience changes of mood .and sometimes we lose our temper, above all, when we live chaotic situations   but nobody like us can laugh and cry at the same time ..

1 comentario:

  1. Victoria,

    Word count:301. Excellent. Your writing is very interesting, but please, pay attention AND CORRECT these obs:

    ... But today we can see a (changed)

    ... a 19 year(s) old woman ..

    ...because in Chile when you (have) 18...

    ...Women are responsible, careful, dedicated to (our) work.

    ...and YOU (had) (an??? dates(PLURAL?)

    ...because a gentleman payS for you .(if he (don't)DOESN'T.. let (it) go). Another advantage is THAT we can get A license (for) TO cry

    ...Sometimes it IS EASIER (more easy)TO get...

    About Disadvantages in Chile (,) unfortunately, at work we are overshadowed by maleS ..

    ...a higher salary for the same JOB ..

    another disadvantage in Chile, is the value of health planS, when you are a woman IT is much more expensive!!! ANother disadvantage is that usually (we) parents are very protective with women.. (In my case my parents are very overprotective).Another(SINGULAR) disadvantages (PLURAL) ..

    ...when we live (caos) CHAOTIC situations...

    Cheers,

    JC

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